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Lunar phases for Brownies - an opportunity for pedants;-)
In message , Robin Leadbeater
wrote "Geoff Smith" wrote in message ... Robin That seems like as good an explanation as is possible in a written paragraph. I think its quite a tricky thing to describe in words, especially for kids to grasp. Much easier using a model or diagram I reckon. Thanks Geoff, There was a diagram (also incorrect!) I plan to replace it with the classic one, something along these lines. Nothing beats the ball and torch demo IMO though;-) http://www.opencourse.info/astronomy...on/moon_phases .gif Your text looked fine to me, the other was so wrong. The only problem with the diagram shown above was that there were no drawings showing what the moon looked like at each phase, or representative phases. The ball and torch demo is of course an excellent teaching technique. -- Roger 52:54:41N 01:30:05W Orion 127mm Maksutov. |
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52.50: Anyhow it's ok now, and it's the brownie's author who needs some slaps Ouch..... " brownies' " author mr |
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Lunar phases for Brownies - an opportunity for pedants;-)
JRS: In article , seen in
news:uk.sci.astronomy, Robin Leadbeater posted at Thu, 25 Sep 2003 11:25:57 :- Cross-posted to uk.rec.scouting, where there are readers known to be concerned with that age-group. They will be better able to judge readability. URS: other responses not XP. Original:- The moon is the brightest object in the night sky. Unlike stars, it does not give off light of its own. Its 'light' is a reflection of the sun's rays. The moon appears as shapes (or phases) when the Earth comes between the sun and the moon, casting a shadow. The moon completes its orbit of the earth every 29 days. The current phase of the moon along with its setting and rising times can usually be found in newspapers. Corrected:- The Moon is the brightest object in the night sky. I think that you can assume that they can already recognise the Moon at night. Also, it is not always the brightest object in the night sky. Sometimes it is not there at all; sometimes, especially when it is new, Venus, Iridium Flares, or aircraft look brighter (beware of pedantic Brownies). The sentence is not needed, if the following "it" is changed. We see it because it reflects sunlight. The Sun shines on one half of the Moon (like day and xxx ^ at a time night on Earth). The shape (phase) depends on how much of the lit side we see. The shape of the Moon does not change; it has no sides, being round. "The shape that we see depends on how much of the lit part faces us." This changes with the Moon's position in it's orbit round the earth. We x "This changes as the Moon goes round the Earth". We can see a full moon every 29 1/2 days when Moon and Sun are on opposite sides of the Earth. Newspapers usually publish the phase and rising and setting times. New version : We can see the Moon because it is lit by the Sun, which shines on half of it at a time (like day and night on Earth). So the shape that we see depends on how much of the lit part faces us. This changes as the Moon goes round the Earth. We can see a full moon every 29 1/2 days when Moon and Sun are on opposite sides of the Earth. Newspapers usually show the day's shape (phase), and the rising and setting times. ** Check that the reasons for the rising and setting of the Sun, and day and night, have been explained, correctly and in a manner that makes the causes of the Moon's daily movement and half-litness obvious. I'd like to replace the remaining "sides", elegantly. Ideally, "when Moon and Sun are on opposite sides of the Earth" should be redundant - "We can see a round 'Full Moon' every 29.5 days." ??? "... when the Earth is between Moon and Sun" ??? It would be nice to add - Sometimes the Earth's shadow crosses the Moon, which is called a Lunar Eclipse. But that may be treated later. Remember that you are addressing both Brownies, who can be surprisingly knowledgeable, and their leaders, who can also be surprisingly ignorant. I once discovered that the sales director of a major importer did not know that the Moon was very much farther away than the clouds; his Brownie did. If there is a URL for the full document, we could work on the whole thing. Does ScoutBase have anything? -- © John Stockton, Surrey, UK. Turnpike v4.00 MIME. © Web URL:http://www.merlyn.demon.co.uk/ - FAQqish topics, acronyms & links; some Astro stuff via astro.htm, gravity0.htm; quotes.htm; pascal.htm; &c, &c. No Encoding. Quotes before replies. Snip well. Write clearly. Don't Mail News. |
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Lunar phases for Brownies - an opportunity for pedants;-)
In article , Dr John Stockton
writes JRS: In article , seen in news:uk.sci.astronomy, Robin Leadbeater posted at Thu, 25 Sep 2003 11:25:57 :- Cross-posted to uk.rec.scouting, where there are readers known to be concerned with that age-group. They will be better able to judge readability. URS: other responses not XP. snip Remember that you are addressing both Brownies, who can be surprisingly knowledgeable, and their leaders, who can also be surprisingly ignorant. I once discovered that the sales director of a major importer did not know that the Moon was very much farther away than the clouds; his Brownie did. If there is a URL for the full document, we could work on the whole thing. Does ScoutBase have anything? I don't know the context in which it is written, but if you are working with younger people, a picture beats a thousand words, and someone getting them to hold up and be part off a 3-D active picture will be even better. Need a desk-lamp (sun) a large football (earth) a smaller football (moon) Can then show them how the moon doesn't actually change shape, but changes what you can see the moon 'goes in' at night - still there but out of view the different types of eclipse - but you need a very big room to show them the aurora. -- Derek Biddle |
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Lunar phases for Brownies - an opportunity for pedants;-)
"Robin Leadbeater" wrote in message ... Some of you may remember my recent post about errors in the guidance documentation given to Brownies and leaders for the Stargazer Badge. A big thank you to everyone. I now have a revised final version. Unfortunately there were length constraints to avoid reprinting more than one page (more words would mean no diagram) Bearing in mind this is badge support documentation and it is expected that leaders will use this as a basis to expand on, I think we have got the important facts across now. Here is the final version: "We see the moon because the sun shines on it. Only one half of the Moon is in sunlight (like day and night on Earth) The shape (phase) depends on how much of the lit side we see. This changes with the Moon's position in its orbit round the Earth. We see a full moon every 29 1/2 days when Moon and Sun are on opposite sides of the Earth. Some newspapers publish the phase and rising and setting times. (Watch out for the moon during the day too!)" Unfortunately, I have now seen in another part, this statement: "The Earth is slightly tilted so some parts of the planet's surface are closer to the sun (and warmer) at certain times of the year" Oh Dear :-(((( I have no idea how to correctly explain the seasons in 25 words! Robin |
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Seasons for Brownies - another opportunity for pedants;-)
"Robin Leadbeater" wrote:
"Robin Leadbeater" wrote in message ... Some of you may remember my recent post about errors in the guidance documentation given to Brownies and leaders for the Stargazer Badge. A big thank you to everyone. I now have a revised final version. Unfortunately there were length constraints to avoid reprinting more than one page (more words would mean no diagram) Bearing in mind this is badge support documentation and it is expected that leaders will use this as a basis to expand on, I think we have got the important facts across now. Here is the final version: "We see the moon because the sun shines on it. Only one half of the Moon is in sunlight (like day and night on Earth) The shape (phase) depends on how much of the lit side we see. This changes with the Moon's position in its orbit round the Earth. We see a full moon every 29 1/2 days when Moon and Sun are on opposite sides of the Earth. Some newspapers publish the phase and rising and setting times. (Watch out for the moon during the day too!)" Unfortunately, I have now seen in another part, this statement: "The Earth is slightly tilted so some parts of the planet's surface are closer to the sun (and warmer) at certain times of the year" Oh Dear :-(((( I have no idea how to correctly explain the seasons in 25 words! The Lunar thread has been really productive - every contributor has unashamedly nicked bits from his/her predecessor leading to a current version that is clearer, shorter and altogether better than any of us could have imagined at the outset. Let the seasons run - you may yet get it in not many more than 25 words Cheers Martin -------------- Martin Frey N 51 02 E 0 47 -------------- |
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Seasons for Brownies - another opportunity for pedants;-)
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Does the handbook go on to say the stars are God's daisy chain? Cheers Martin -------------- Martin Frey N 51 02 E 0 47 -------------- |
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Seasons for Brownies - another opportunity for pedants;-)
"Martin Frey" wrote in message ... Let the seasons run - you may yet get it in not many more than 25 words OK - here is my starter for ten:- The Earth is slightly tilted. This means that the sun rises higher and the days are longer and warmer in summer than in winter. Robin |
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Seasons for Brownies - another opportunity for pedants;-)
"Robin Leadbeater" wrote:
OK - here is my starter for ten:- The Earth is slightly tilted. This means that the sun rises higher and the days are longer and warmer in summer than in winter. Robin 8/10 If it's tilted, why doesn't my drink spill? (well - only spills sometimes...) Is their a section on night and day and a year? The seasons needs to knit in with these - we'd need to know how they are tackled. Or just send them the uksa faq? No, perhaps not... Cheers Martin -------------- Martin Frey N 51 02 E 0 47 -------------- |
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Seasons for Brownies - another opportunity for pedants;-)
"Martin Frey" wrote in message ... "Robin Leadbeater" wrote: OK - here is my starter for ten:- The Earth is slightly tilted. This means that the sun rises higher and the days are longer and warmer in summer than in winter. Robin 8/10 If it's tilted, why doesn't my drink spill? (well - only spills sometimes...) Is their a section on night and day and a year? The seasons needs to knit in with these - we'd need to know how they are tackled. Or just send them the uksa faq? No, perhaps not... Ehm! Time for a little background to focus our thoughts a little ;-) In this section the Brownies are asked to name the planets and find out some facts about four of them. This was a suggested fact about the Earth (although it is not unique to the Earth of course, but we had better not go there) I am looking for "Just the facts Ma'am" They were also steered to http://kids.msfc.nasa.gov/ Good info by the looks but a little too "kinda cute" for my taste (Then again, a Brownie I am most certainly not!) Robin |
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