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Old January 28th 04, 02:32 AM
Mary Shafer
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On Tue, 27 Jan 2004 05:24:35 -0600, Pat Flannery
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Mary Shafer wrote:

If Pat's doing the commentary, we won't know it's not if it isn't.


Oh, now that's a turn of phrase...ranks right up there with Bilbo's
birthday speech... :-)


I noticed that just as I clicked "send". Let's try again.

If Pat's doing the commentary, we may not know that it's not going to
Venus if it's actually going elsewhere.

Not elegant, but a lot clearer.

If it's sent somewhere else, we may not know it's not going to Venus
if Pat's doing the commentary.

Better. Not perfect but certainly better.

Mary

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Mary Shafer Retired aerospace research engineer