"Danny Deger" wrote:

"Derek Lyons" wrote in message
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"Danny Deger" wrote:

You can download a draft of my book, "Houston, You Have a Problem" from
http://www.dannydeger.net.

The subtitle isn't, but should be, "Danny's lengthy whine on how he is
invariably the Steely Eyed Hero who is never wrong and is invariably
mistreated because of it".

Considering the fact you haven't had time to read it,

I read over half of it, and deep skimmed the rest. While I do have a
high reading speed and pretty dammed good comprehension and retention,
your 'prose' placed little demand on any of those faculties.

I don't think you are qualified to comment.

ROTFLMAO.

For one thing it is not lengthy. The editor I am working with is asking
for more pages.

Probably in the vain hope that once he sifts the gems from the dross
he'll get a useable sentence. Maybe two.

P.S. Can you please killfile me!!!!

If you don't want your writings criticized, don't publically post 'em.

D.
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Touch-twice life. Eat. Drink. Laugh.

-Resolved: To be more temperate in my postings.
Oct 5th, 2004 JDL