You seem to be an independent, original and perhaps poetic thinker. I
have read the first pages of your book. One of my problems is that the
chapters are rather inaccessible. They lack a clear introduction to the
problems you are addressing. You presuppose us to have active knowledge
of the subject matter, but most readers of course don't.

I suspect that there may perhaps be some merit in some of your ideas.
The difficulty for the reader is to find and discern that grain of
truth.

You clearly put a lot of effort and soul in your book and I admire
that.

However, my biggest problem is that you caught the ball and started
running with it, without verifying that the object you caught was
indeed a ball.

There is no dark energy, nor any dark matter. There never was a Big
Bang. The universe is not expanding. General relativity is not valid,
but a dud - and you do not have to be a physicist to realize that, any
teenage girl painting her nails probably can. And as to black holes,
possibly the mega black holes in the centre of galaxies exist, but the
others certainly don't - and if the latter don't exist, then the former
perhaps do not exist either. All these ideas are astronomical delusions
and delusional astronomy. And so, therefore, is the ball you are
running away with. But hey: you are in the good company of many
respected scientists.